put the shreds together
a creative patch work
hid the stains
a lovely tie-n-dye
no hearts as sleeves
no chips for shoulders
.... parallel universe ....
unguarded heart
me a softhead
i know you are messed up
i feel at home
........third dimension.........
moon lullaby - in your arms
sunrise - under your curled lashes
thrumming under my palm
we held hands ... all but once
the shudders run still
your steady breath... those 30 seconds
and purple thunder in my heart
hunger and quiet rising suffused
me - a darkness magnet
... supreme sensual sentient
haven't seen the dreamland, ever since
... the eyes closed, at last
enter the gates... at last.
CpRyt@NeerS
pics courtesy: http://www.smashingmagazine.com
15 comments:
Moments...Priceless!
ha! I know..Am wondering what I am doing reading blogs on a weekend...Well..had a choice between watching some lousy movie on sony and blogging..I jus choose the latter. Had to stay home to get some plumbing work done..Wow! my life is getting really exciting!
hey... why did you 'drop' that other post? I would not have joined. But would have been interested in reading the collective (needless to say).
just read your comment.
so hi again :)
doing a few things out there [ started cooking too ;) ]. so not doing much here. But I am regular to the usual places.
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the quieter I.
hmmmmm.....
I always love ur poetry...I feel like going inside your brain to grasp the full description of the "dream land" as you mentioned...
Interesting poetry!
j
another great poetry - but feel like something's missing - i dunno - just something :) - anyhow, reads just fine :)
gr8 work!!
Ahh....
I dont know why, but i always had something about "uncurled eyelashes". hmmm...
maybe choices come with experience/ or habit?
i love this
soft
beautiful
the pictures are so expressinve
aha!
liked the pics too..
keep writing :D
That world of yours neers is fascinating...you are such a wonderful dear soul...I am always both transformed by that mighty pen of yours...warmest greetings from the other side of this lonely rotating planet of ours...
Hey neers. Sorry I've been missing in action from your writs of late. Your last poem is beautiful, you dont need me to tell you how much.
or do you?
Heh, anywys, could you do me a tiny favor; Could you check out my myspace pace at: myspace.com/makrythm and tell me what you think about the songs I have on...
Always all yers.
I absolutel and most open arms welcome a video shoot, and it would be an honor to have you write me a screenplay.
Heres where I'm at mentaly; I just got done working on an album that took me one year to finish, composing, sound engineering, prodution and everything else. I have no idea how to start or how to go about a video, I mentally drained! Have you ever shot a video? please pour out your spirit to me!? can you??!!??!!!?? lol.
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